Post by avery gates on Jan 5, 2008 10:37:28 GMT -5
So I need some help creating a new character, I'm not too sure right now if I'll do one of the others later but I just kind of wanted to get some opinions please and thank you.
First off we have Tyler Gates. He's the younger brother of Avery and has often been reminded of it. For the past 17 years of his 17 year old life he's been reminded that he was supposed to be a girl. Avery is constantly showing him up with grades so he often turns to his sports, something that he's better at than Avery, and neglects his grades. Although people think he's a tough jock that doesn't care, he really does and goes home at night only to vent all his anger on anything around him. He's basically a ticking timebomb that eventually will have to go off and no one can tell on who it will be.
Next we have Carly James. She's a girl from New York who moved here about a year ago. Entering her junior year she couldn't help but want a little more of life so she started joining different clubs until she made her way into softball and fell in love with it. Now going into her senior year she's struggling with playing softball due to her grades that her parents fuss over constantly telling her that she can't play unless she has all A's. Now Carly is willing to do just about anything for softball but how far will she go?
Finally we have Danielle James. Her parents have been divorced since before she was born and her mom has a tendency to bring home jerks most nights. One night one of them raped her and when she tried to tell her mom she wouldn't believe her so she came to live with her dad. Well she never fully recovered from that night and as such she sort of turned to boys for comfort, in more than one way. It wasn't too long before she was known far and wide as a slut, something she didn't really care about.
These are my charries thus far, please tell me what you think.
First off we have Tyler Gates. He's the younger brother of Avery and has often been reminded of it. For the past 17 years of his 17 year old life he's been reminded that he was supposed to be a girl. Avery is constantly showing him up with grades so he often turns to his sports, something that he's better at than Avery, and neglects his grades. Although people think he's a tough jock that doesn't care, he really does and goes home at night only to vent all his anger on anything around him. He's basically a ticking timebomb that eventually will have to go off and no one can tell on who it will be.
Next we have Carly James. She's a girl from New York who moved here about a year ago. Entering her junior year she couldn't help but want a little more of life so she started joining different clubs until she made her way into softball and fell in love with it. Now going into her senior year she's struggling with playing softball due to her grades that her parents fuss over constantly telling her that she can't play unless she has all A's. Now Carly is willing to do just about anything for softball but how far will she go?
Finally we have Danielle James. Her parents have been divorced since before she was born and her mom has a tendency to bring home jerks most nights. One night one of them raped her and when she tried to tell her mom she wouldn't believe her so she came to live with her dad. Well she never fully recovered from that night and as such she sort of turned to boys for comfort, in more than one way. It wasn't too long before she was known far and wide as a slut, something she didn't really care about.
These are my charries thus far, please tell me what you think.